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What Makes an Effective Sentence

Also when you have good friends and when you need help in class you can ask one of your good friends nicely if they can help you with your learning when you're stuck.

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Swimming lessons

What Makes an Effective Paragraph?

When I go to rinse myself in the shower I rinse my body to get the germs off my hair and my body. When we get out of the shower we get cold and we start shivering and shaking. We can’t wait to swim in the pool!

On the last day of swimming we had relay races to see how fast we can swim. On the final day we went to our groups in sharks, whales, and dolphins. It was exhausting when we were doing relay races.

I love swimming! This term I had 8 lessons with some amazing instructors. They taught me lots of skill, and my technique is getting better and better.

Thanks Mr Burt for paying for professional coaches to teach us.

Takapu

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What Makes an Effective Paragraph?

In my group I have been thinking about what I need to do to   write an effective paragraph.
Here is the rubric I'm going to use to reflect on my writing.

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