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Showing posts with label Narrative Writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 14 June 2016

Captain Hook

Captain Hook
Once upon a time there lived a man named Captain Hook, he lived in a boat with his two best mates named Jake and Josh in a beach named Buckland beach. Jake and Josh would always do what Captain Hook told them to do like they were his slaves, but no they were Captain Hooks best mates. Captain Hook was a bad man. He always make people cry and his favourite thing to do is stealing people's pressures and good stuffs.

One morning on a rainy day everyone stayed inside their houses, Captain Hook and his best mates were the only people hanging out outside. While they were hanging out outside in the rain they went out for a walk just around the beach. While they were walking around the beach they suddenly saw a pole near a tree that had a sign on it. The sign said Treasure hunt. Captain Hook and his mates were so shocked. As soon as they saw the sign digging beside the tree. While they were digging they definitely didn’t see the Treasure box.

Then they tried the other side of the tree and started digging, but they didn’t see it. So they walked all the way to the end of the beach and tried digging if the Treasure box was there. Suddenly after that they got so shocked that they saw a shiny box right in front of their face, so they quickly pulled it out opened it and it was full of shiny golden stuffs.

After that Captain Hook told Jake and Josh to run and put the Treasure box in their boat before someone comes and caught them.
As they ran to take the Treasure box into their boat there was security car that drove slowly. As Jake and Josh looked at the security car the security car stopped. As soon as the security car stopped they started running, so the security's started chasing them.


Thursday, 9 June 2016

Narrative Writing

Kia Ora Bloggers! Today Team 5 has been writing a Narrative Writing. This Narrative Writing is to see how good we are at writing. I have wrote a story of me doing things at home when its not school days. I really hope its interesting to you. Hope you enjoy it.

On Tuseday morning I woke up early in the morning at 6:30am, it was so freezing. I was thinking if I had school or not because, I saw my cousin getting ready for school. So I walked into the bathroom and washed my face and afterwards I walked into my cousins room and she said “Oii you don’t have school, its teachers only day.” Then I said “Oh yeah that’s right.” So I went back to bed and relaxed myself on the bed. After that my cousin left to school and I was so bored because, I was the only child left in the house with my uncle. A while later I got up and went into the lounge and watched T.V. I was watching Tennis Competions.

After watching the Television it was almost 2:30pm. I stood up and walked around the whole house just to find my chromebook. After that I got sick and tired of finding my chromebook. So I rang my Aunt and asked her if she’s seen my chromebook and then she said that she put it in the cupboard. So I went to where the cupboard was and got my chromebook out and started chatting my friends on gmail if they’re coming to Talitha. A few minutes later I got a message from Raewen and she said she might not make it  to Talitha. As I got the message, I had an sad emotion on my because, I wanted to hang out with her, but she couldn’t make it.

Later then the time was just about to hit 3:40pm. So I quickly ran into the bathroom and turned the shower on. Later then I got changed and jumped on to my chromebook and started chatting to my friends and asking them what time are they coming to Talitha. After that it was almost 4:30pm. When it was just about to hit 4:30pm I started walking to the PIPC church which is Mrs Tele’a’s church. While I was walking I saw Taunese walking towards me. As I saw her, I started power walking towards her and told her let’s quickly go inside.

As we walked into the church hall, it is was so quiet and kind of dark because, they turned off the lights, so they could watch the movie clearly. The movie was called Tangled. It was such an amazing and funny movie that we had watched. In the middle of the movie we had a short break. After the break we finished off the movie and read a little paragraph all together from the bible.

At the end of the session we all went home with an happy emotion on our face.