Thursday, 11 December 2014


Hello Here is an Paragraph that our literacy class made. We all had to write about Earth from Space. Hope you leave some feedback on my blog... Thank You

Earth from space, satellite spinning, global outlook.

Once upon a time we could see something coming for the satellite. So when it got closer to the satellite we could see  it. When we saw it was rock then the rock is coming for the satellite really slowly. Then the rock smashed into the earth. Then the earth was shaking. Soon the rock flied out and flied away to Island. soon when it got to the Island it smashed into the ground. When it smashed into the ground the ground started to crack the ground was cracking for a few minutes and the it stopped. When it stopped we could see a big hole on the ground. So we all coved the hole with full rocks.

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