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Monday, 14 September 2015

Cross Country Recount

Kia Ora, Bloggers! In our Literacy Class we started a Graphic Organise also a Recount. This Graphic Organiser was a Recount about our Cross Country two weeks ago. So our Literacy Class has been working on Recount today because we are starting our writing test next term so "Good Luck" to us! Hope You Like My Recount ;)

Firstly, The year 7 girls lined up to get ready to walk onto the field where our track was. I was so nervous when we got to the track and Mr Burt told us to line up in one line.


Then, Mr Burt yelled out “On Your Mark” “Get Set” “BANG”. Then everyone started running and sprinting all the way to where the gate was. When we got to the gate we started jogging slower.


After that, we almost got to the other side of the finish line. So we started sprinting all the way to the rugby goal. Then we stopped running and then we heard Mr Burt Slammed the Block then the year 6 girls started running when they got to us we ran with.


Finally, we nearly got to the finish line. So we sprinted all the way to the finished line. After we were done and proud of ourselves. So we walked over to the table and grabbed a cup of water.

After that we were so proud of ourselves that we finished the Cross Country run. Then we all “Hi Fived” each other for finishing the Cross Country run.

1 comment:

  1. Good job Finau! Next time, please try to add some figurative language into your writing.

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