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Monday 21 September 2015

Te Oro Recount

Kia Ora, Bloggers! In our Literacy Class we started a Graphic Organise also a Recount. This Graphic Organiser was a Recount about "Something You Did For The First Time". So our Literacy Class has been working on Recount today because we are starting our writing test next term so "Good Luck" to us! Hope You Like My Te Oro Recount :)

Te Oro


Firstly, When I started Te Oro I was so shy. My Group was called the Nesian Fusion. I did not want to walk into the room to start our lessons because I was very shy.


Then, My friend May helped me feel happy, so we walked into the room and started our dance lessons then I felt more happy that my friend had me happy.


After that, Me, May and my other friend Paige had to learn a Samoan dance and the other people had to learn the stick dance, which it was very hard to learn. It took them a few weeks to learn so I felt so nervous that they might drop it and will be embarrassing.

Finally, Our Practices were done. So we had to perform at Pt England School Hall on Friday the 18th and then on Saturday the 19th we performed at Te Oro. I was so nervous that we had perform at Pt England School Hall and also at Te Oro, I felt like I was gonna Cry.



1 comment:

  1. Nice recount of your practices leading up to your amazing performances over the weekend Finau! Could you try to include some figurative language into your writing?

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